finally got it working, what ever you did it now works.
I only took a quick view but it looks good. nice combination of text and images. If anything I'd have to add it would be that perhaps with the "western" bias of reading left to right, I'd suggest putting the pics on the right side of the text. this way the eye can read left to right and then continue to the pics, instead of read sentence from middle of page, and then run eye back to the left to look at pic. then all over again.
also the floating drawings on white look good but since you've included the last picture (which is "boxed") I'd suggest perhaps putting a vertical line, box, shaded background, etc to divide the text from the images.
oh yeah perhaps a lebel of the last pic would be a good idea? (what are those, bathing suits?)