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Jay_Johl
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*Updated 06.07.2018*

Hi Core 77 Forum users

I designed the Alkemista Alcohol Infusion Vessel for my client, the product made $120,000+ via crowdfunding
The Product won the Red Dot Product Design 2018 Award

https://jayjohl.com/industrial-design-alkemista/

All and any constructive criticism on both the product and the page is welcome.

Thank you

-Jay Johl
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This is an excellent exhibition of process and the product is cool. The graphic design needs a lot of work, though. Right now the fonts and spacing just aren't working. Maybe go on behance and look at some graphic designers' layouts for inspiration.

also i think this belongs in "portfolios"
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Thanks John for the feedback.
I'll improve my UI/UX as much as I can.
Thanks for the appreciation in the work

Mods move to "portfolios"
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I think that link is not a good way to get feedback.
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yo wrote:I think that link is not a good way to get feedback.
Hey Michael

Great talk at the 2014 Core77.com object culture conference.
"I want to draw stuff from the future" that's a great phrase and quote for designers!

If you have any ideas on ways I should share my case study page to receive feedback and criticism it would be much appreciated

Thanks again.

Jay Johl
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Jay,

Thanks for coming to the talk. It was a un one to give.

I'd post the work directly into the forum like this poster did. Notice the amount of feedback:
http://boards.core77.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=37060
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