From looking through it briefly, I feel like you've covered all of the bases, but are a bit light on content. I'd like to see you explore a lot more ideas throughout each project and show some more complexity in your technical skills (presentation level sketches and renders, detailed CAD etc.) to give you padding that is relevant. I also think that you are better off with bigger and bolder imagery, and more pages, than trying to cram lots of photos onto one page.
The presentation of 'Return' is working really well for me, and I think the other projects would benefit from some tweaks to give them a similar visual style.
adam_adam wrote:I've recently graduated and I feel like during school, there has always been an emphasis on showing process, but after looking at other portfolios, I feel many people go for very simple high quality final renders over showing process.
Definitely show process, but I don't need to see that you can brainstorm, sketch, model-make, CAD and render for every project. Perhaps try to focus each project on one skill, so you end up with a detailed sketch/idea generation focussed project, a detailed CAD project, a detailed model-making project etc. which collectively show your capabilities, but in much more detail than you are now. Make me feel confident that you can do what I need if I hire you.