Looking good Gerry
. You do have a LOT of pages for each project though, there are 31 for the first one, do you think it might benefit from condensing it a little? It's great to see the process, but there are lots of pages covering the same section of design at the moment.
It's got a nice story sort of flow as you scroll through Behance, but there are a couple of points that I got a bit confused at, the colour blocks and breaks between some sections like the beginning of the 'Two Player Arcade Machine" lost me a little, I think because the page breaks aren't that obvious on Behance?
I'm using a 15" screen and struggled a little to read your first page comfortably from a normal distance, it is legible, just a little strained for the smaller screen!
I LOVE the image of the Arcade Machine in the boot of the car by the way!!
Is it worth putting a contact or call to action on the last page?