Portfolio Help

Hi everyone,
I’ve recently put my portfolio up on coroflot and I was wondering if I could get your opinions.
I followed the tips of another discussion thread, to not be afraid of scale and colour, to showcase my process with each project and include a broad selection but now I’d like a fresh set of eyes to look over it and tell me what you think is missing.
Not enough sketch work or too much writing etc

This is it:

Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated,

Work looks great! some really strong images and great process work.