I’m on the same wavelength as bepster and Sian with regards to your work as well.
I’m not going to judge too quickly but the overall presentation isn’t quite there for me. I’m wondering if you have some sort of PDF/presentation that you might have shown your tutors to get your grades during university. I would have hoped they made you compile it all together with a beginning (research), middle (ideation&development) and end (execution). Post that up for us to see.
In the mean time the thread Sian suggested is a great example and also have a look through this one too: Favorite portfolios
Those are the folios that we are openly reacting to so yours needs to be close if not better than those.