Here it is, yet another portfolio post. But I would truly appreciate it if you guys gave me some feedback, both positive and constructive criticism…and if you need to be mean to get your point accross, thats fine too.
What is lacking? what should I leave as is? Am i competent?
I think this is great for a just a coroflot portfolio. The only part that I didn’t like were that the large sketches image was of various projects rather than showing the development of a single project. I like sketches when I see a rough idea slowly turn into something interesting. The other images really show that you have a variety of skills and can handle a variety of products as well. Good job.
d-flux. I would concentrate on getting your stuff down on paper first, then concentrate on the web. Dont spend too much time on your website. Mailers and follow up calls are more effective. Email campaigns are effective as well.
I agree with molested_cow about describing your sketches. They should speak for themselves. perhaps it would be better to show sketches of your yingyang chair or the motorised scrubbing brush.