Have a look at my recent work, promise it'll be fun!

hello all you design wizards, this is my first time posting so please be gentle with me :smiley: any feed back will be greatly appreciated.



I think you should break the site up into smaller pieces. The intro is way too long.

For the airgun project: display your sketches first because they are better than those photos.

yeh, since this was my first online attempt, I made the file a big too large. but with a bit faster connection it would only take about 30 sec or so to load the intro. since the site is graphic intensive, I might re-do it in dream-weaver next time around.
as for the Air Gun project, which photos were you refering to? or do you think the doodle sketches should be left out?