Folio Feedback Please, ID Student

Hi my name is Aaron, I am an ID student at Swinburne Uni, Melbourne, Australia.

I am currently looking for a internship / Industry Placement position and it would be great if I could get some feedback on my work before I start sending it out.

I’m still unsure of what level I’m at, so any feedback on the quality of work, presentation or anything else would greatly appreciated.