Critique welcome

Tony_

I remember seeing these on KG. Good start man. How old arre you?

My advice forr taking it to the next step:

1_ Hand writing. Remember drawings are about communication. If you have notes on there, which can really help the viewer, they should be readable and aestheticly pleasing.

2_ Proportions. Study shoes that you like, what about the shapes makes them better than other shoes? How do the details flow together? Study the relationships of the shapes.

3_ Drawing style. Study drawings you find successful. You wil often find variations in line weight, some way for the drawing to interact with the page via a ground plane, shadow, or vignette. Things like this.

Good work, keep it up man.