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These is my little work…please give your comments good or bad both;)…and also suggesstions. Thanks

The McDonalds, Backpack, and Auto-Rickshaw projects feel like one is looking at a sketchbook.

There are so many drawings without much explanation or order that your entire portfolio feels haphazard. It is a bit hard to tell what one is seeing!

You have plenty of ideas and detail to work with. If you can find a way to put them together in to a few sketches of ‘final’ products, your ideas will appear more complete and be easier to visualize.