Advice me!

Any critics or comments?
What should be improved?

The portfolio must be a real bore thats no one bothered to comment huh?

what type of job are you looking for? What are you trying to convey with this? I see a lot of renderings, are you looking for a job rendering and doing CAD work?

Cool artwork. It’s not really a portfolio more examples of work. The work look okay but I don’t really understand what is going on with most of the examples. You need to create a story with every project. Make me interested and not confused. Also what i it about that project that will jump out and grab my attention.

ok…thanks

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