I think I am understanding the assembly of the shoe, but the way it is presented seems to be in a confusing order or layout. Maybe if you organized it in a more straightforward manner there would be less confusing. The obvious way would be in a more similar order to an exploded view.
When you first posted it was like an inspirational slap in the face. You really have shown how deep you can go in the design of footwear, from inspirations to research to tech detailing. I also really enjoy reading all of the feedback that you have gotten because it lets you know that revision can be endless also. Once you have a killer presentation like you have created, you can always revisit parts of it and try to make it pop even more. Great work!