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Postby Sumistha_Das » September 8th, 2017, 12:15 am


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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » September 8th, 2017, 12:22 am


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I am posing my pencil sharpener sketches twice because the scanned copies are not showing the draw through lines.
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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » September 8th, 2017, 12:24 am


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Postby Sumistha_Das » September 8th, 2017, 12:25 am


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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby ralphzoontjens » September 8th, 2017, 4:41 am

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Hi Sumistha,

It's good to see that your perspective work has improved as well, especially the ellipses.
You can still improve on this as well as on the proportions for example in the lines you draw midway across the forms.
This communicates very well if done properly.

So far as a recap I like your June 7 headphone sketch the best because the first sketch was freehand, loose and simple yet still accurately describing the design intent. It is great that you are also practicing presentation hand rendering - yet exploration and presentation are different types of sketching and have to be in different threads as do discussions about your design projects. Your June 24th camera sketches also were not bad except for the ellipses and your 08/28 mice sketch with blue pencil also works well. Make it clear what you are improving on and keep posting!
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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » September 18th, 2017, 10:32 am


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So my first week's Product Design 1 assignment was mice concept. After group brain storming I chose to design concept mice for visually impaired and visionless people. This week I will be researching more on this and sketch few more ideas around it. While doing my research I found out that not many companies are making mice for these people. However one Israeli based company called Tactile World ltd have built mouse around braille system. First week I focused mainly on shapes. This week I will be exploring more alternative than traditional mouse.
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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » September 18th, 2017, 10:34 am


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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » September 18th, 2017, 10:35 am


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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » September 18th, 2017, 10:38 am


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First week we mostly explored freehand sketching of basic geometric shapes, ellipse constructions and 1pt,2pt,3pt cubes.
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Postby Sumistha_Das » September 18th, 2017, 12:49 pm


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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » September 18th, 2017, 12:51 pm


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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » September 18th, 2017, 12:55 pm


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In two days span during my class break I did these sketches. My DD2 instructor added the background and asked me to add major and minor axis to give more sketching feelings to the page.
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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » September 18th, 2017, 1:00 pm


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ralphzoontjens wrote:Hi Sumistha,

It's good to see that your perspective work has improved as well, especially the ellipses.
You can still improve on this as well as on the proportions for example in the lines you draw midway across the forms.
This communicates very well if done properly.

So far as a recap I like your June 7 headphone sketch the best because the first sketch was freehand, loose and simple yet still accurately describing the design intent. It is great that you are also practicing presentation hand rendering - yet exploration and presentation are different types of sketching and have to be in different threads as do discussions about your design projects. Your June 24th camera sketches also were not bad except for the ellipses and your 08/28 mice sketch with blue pencil also works well. Make it clear what you are improving on and keep posting!


My main focus is to sketch loose and quick. So, hence forth I will try to post only related to those topics to keep this thread in order. Thanks once again for taking time to review my work.

Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby AndyMc » September 19th, 2017, 6:59 am

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The block forms are communicating well.

For the first page of headphones, try to drop your lines as smooth strokes, rather than as scratchy segments. It helps if you 'ghost' the stroke you want over the page before actually drawing it. The second page of headphones is an improvement with much cleaner linework, good work!

Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » September 22nd, 2017, 9:01 am


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AndyMc wrote:The block forms are communicating well.

For the first page of headphones, try to drop your lines as smooth strokes, rather than as scratchy segments. It helps if you 'ghost' the stroke you want over the page before actually drawing it. The second page of headphones is an improvement with much cleaner linework, good work!


Hi Andy,

Point noted. Thanks for the feedback. I will work on it. Planning to sketch few more headphones today.

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