FH13:
Not much to critique there. As an industrial designer you need to educate and convince the viewer why it is a good design.
a) there are no ideation sketches so no way of knowing why you chose that final direction
Why would I want something angular and sharp in between my legs???
Nice graphics and renderings but unfortunately there are a lot of portfolio’s out there with those.
Please show your thought process and really think about the whys & hows instead of the “final” “finished” rendering.
Agreed, all of this is in the process of being put together, was just looking for feedback on what is currently shown. Maybe just got a little too ahead of myself.
Thanks!