Not much to critique there. As an industrial designer you need to educate and convince the viewer why it is a good design.
a) there are no ideation sketches so no way of knowing why you chose that final direction
b) no materials or call outs. Is it a cast iron seat?
c) no mood boards that guide your design direction
d) no research explaining what’s wrong with the dozens if not hundreds of saddles out there.
e) how is the saddle made. I don’t see any fasteners or believable assembly methods
Why would I want something angular and sharp in between my legs???
Nice graphics and renderings but unfortunately there are a lot of portfolio’s out there with those.
Please show your thought process and really think about the whys & hows instead of the “final” “finished” rendering.