Kudos: nice job telling the story. Clean presentation. I like how you made it fit with the rest of the MS product ecosystem.
Critique… take with a grain of salt:
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The corners look like they’re gonna wear through my jeans pockets real quick.
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Why wasn’t the form inspired by existing Surface products, to fit in with the brand language?
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I’m confused why you say “leave the mouse at home” when the image shows someone working at a desktop computer. Aren’t you just replacing the mouse altogether? I’m skeptical on desirability of this feature.
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The Hololens glasses are clearly photoshopped onto that girl. You at least need some sort of shadow on the girl below the glasses. And the lighting on the glasses doesn’t agree with the rest of the image. Should be an easy fix.