Hi Peter,
Have a look at this: http://www.portfoliohandbook.com/
The layout could definately do with improvement. There is no consistency between your pages, and the text boxes are all floaty and misaligned. Some of the headings have strangely massive spacing between words and I picked up a couple of typos.
I’d beef up the kitchenware project if you want to include it in your folio. The work feels empty to me as you haven’t shown any design methodology. Did you really design kitchenware by making a couple of rough models and then pumping out a quick render? What else was involved to go from start to finish? You said that it is durable and efficient, why is it durable and efficient?