Hi Daniel,
You’re very much on the concept side and your designs and sketches are good.
You can refine your designs much more focusing on details and proportioning.
I would like to see some more depth in your portfolio, either towards understanding of target markets, manufacturing or ideation skills.
The crane toy is great, a more photorealistic rendering would have been good showing the actual look of the materials. Also for the Chanel sketch, it’s good but more detail and realism would be great.
For the dog toy I wonder if there is a need enough so people will buy this rather than a gimmick - for example you can also convert the design towards a children’s toy and get faster ROI as well as create an interesting game for kids.