Hi Sophie, thanks very much for taking a look and for your feedback! I will definitely thin it down and work on the small text on that first page. I’ll also create call to action for the last page.
You make a great point about the page layout and color breaks being difficult to determine where one page ends and the next begins. I think I’ll try making that more clear by blocking out more of the page in one color or tinting the white backgrounds a light grey.