Looking to improve

Thank you yo and Brian for the feedback! I tried to apply it to the sketch I did last night, though the one I posted on instagram was not quite as contrasty as I thought it had looked on my iPad. So I upped it a bit and I’ll post it below:


Do you guys think I should I have gone darker in the shadows? Also, I wasn’t totally certain what I should do with the toe area since I had the black shaping the bottom and the white shaping the top, so I went with a blend.

Thanks!