Brutal honesty appreciated!

Thank you Azrehan, I will keep going! What kind of exhibition are you thinking of, example?


Thank you so much for all your feedback regarding process. I’ve added a slideshow of processes to my egghop project http://www.whywhywhy.work/egg-hop/ , and am intending to do the same for the other projects. Could you let me know what you think about it?

You’re really spot-on with building–block, I’ve been following their work.

Identity and focus is indeed something I’ve been struggling with when I am creating this portfolio, so it’s really good to hear what vibe you got from it. And perhaps I’ve been targeting my efforts in the wrong direction…

Thank you for the kind words and encouragement! I only have a pdf document version of what I have on the website in order to explain my projects in person, and occasionally with more dirtier process photos. But so far I have not gotten a chance to use it. I have updated my egg hop project with a process slideshow, and would love to know what you think about it. http://www.whywhywhy.work/egg-hop/

Thank you for your insights! Do you think it would work if I place my projects in contexts of existing brands and how my project matches their philosophy and market? Would you be able to point me to a project that achieves this link to business goals?

Thank you Keno! I did think twice about the navigation… quite frankly I copied the floating navigation style from a graphic designer I like. I took out the visual diary component, I agree that it does not really add much given its contents. What do you think is the issue with the site title?

Which projects do you think seem ripe for kickstarter?

Also do you like the way I updated this project for the process (slideshow)? http://www.whywhywhy.work/egg-hop/