Hi Ryan,
Thanks for posting and I am happy to give you some feedback.
The first thing that strikes me is that your website is a bit meager in content and lacks a clear personal touch.
Your Retrieve project is clearly your best project and well visualized and explained.
The other projects are lacking in story. As does your ‘About’ section. What drives you in design?
From your pictures I see that you have a story, you just need to tell it.
Your sketching and rendering skills are OK but do not stand out. Also your form design abilities lack a bit of refinement.
These would be great exercises to make your portfolio stand out more.
-Ralph