Hi Jaimie,
Thanks for posting. From what I can see you have good design abilities and the commitment to become an industrial designer. You have some creative ideas and can perform in teams which is very important. You should be able to get a job. From what I can see you can improve on the ways you communicate about your work and yourself - your future employer will want to know why to specifically hire you over all the others, what you want to offer and what your plans would be at that company. See if you can find something that sets you apart and put more emphasis on that to tell your own story. What you can also improve on are more in-depth explanations as to how you handle projects and make design decisions and optionally back it up with literature. In the meantime, keep moving forward by looking for various types of jobs that relate to you, work on projects and on your portfolio in the meantime.