ok thanks to both of you for the helpful feedback. Im working on incorporating all these great critiques. Definitely difficult designing things as a freelancer without others to help push you more and I think that is my biggest struggle. So much of my work has been relatively form less design work unfortunately, perhaps thats my own fault for not pushing more. Majority of my projects have been with startups who just want something remotely decent looking which i think i have accomplished, but i want my work to be much more.