Happy to help Gerry!
These all look improved, so thats a good sign.
Shadows and perspective are still a little rough. For example. take a look at your Xbox controller…based on the highlights it looks like you have a light source on your right but then your shadow is mostly cast against the right of the controller. This is backwards and messes with the eye a bit. If possible, try to clean up the smudging effect your renderings have.
Keep improving over break!