Nice improvements Kelly. Very nice step forward with those last pages.
When thinking about the bags, think about the details. How it is put together. What is the bag for? Based on the functions, what little features can you give it? A hidden pocket in just the right place.
On the notes, don’t tell me it is fabric, tell me what kind of fabric it is. is it waxed duck canvas like a traditional outdoorsman bag, or is it a technical polly knit?
Lastly, don’t be afraid to pump up the contrast on these. Check out one of your sketches that I adjusted the levels on. Make it pop.
Good work! Keep pushing yourself and you will continue to see these big jumps!
