Already got some feedback from a principle designer at Frog this morning, I’m gonna type out his main points just to share with the boards and other students who may look at this thread in the future.
Much like we had talked about, the final product visuals and details are lacking, however, I’m really happy that this is now the glaring hole to focus on. When I first started creating a portfolio it was difficult to pick a starting point when every aspect is weak.
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Graphics and specifically Gill Sans Typeface can be improved. Seek out graphic design friend to help massage.
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Lacking detail and believable execution on renderings for music project. Outlined figures are tired, adding photos with real people will take portfolio to next level. Also, Ideation page could use some 1-2-3 read to be more dynamic.
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Amazon vehicle is cool, again, needs same level of refinement needed for music project.
4.Last page of sketches in sketchbook are worse than page previous, this page isn’t needed.
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Quality > Quantity
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Competition to get into Frog is fierce