Thanks for taking the time to go through my portfolio Richard!
I’m starting to see more and more what I need to do. I’m in Spring break, so I’m planning to be in the labs all break and hope to flush some of this out.
As far as the music project:
A. Do you think that having this page before the refinement sketch page fills the gap you mentioned? Or do you think that there’s entirely not enough content/explanation on the refinement page for the K-5,6-8,9-12 sketch page?
B.I’m definitely having a challenging time explaining the system in as few words as possible, I’m going to try and get the entire story out and then simplify and remove slides from there.
C,E. Agreed 100 %. I haven’t figured out a successful way to showcase the final designs, I was hoping that by placing them into a scenario it would help, but I see what you mean. I’ll work out the details and have some updates soon, it definitely looks unfinished and bare.
Thanks again!
Aaron