Good work. You seem to have a pretty solid grasp on rendering skills. I would recommend finding a good lateral view template instead of a photo, because photos sometimes appear skewed and can make it tricky to communicate your sketch. For instance, the photo you used looks to be angled slightly past a straight lateral view, but not enough to make it a true 3/4 view. You have a very strong start, take it to the next level and apply it to an original design.