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January 20, 2013, 5:02pm
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choto:
Doesn’t have to be a crazy photo real render but you definitely must have solid construction (most of your ellipses are skewed right now, do some underlays if you need to), tighter marker render or some light photoshopping. Here are a couple examples, notice they are not that much tighter or rendered than what you have, but the perspective is locked in and the rendering is still loose yet descriptive.
Mike DiTullo’s sketch:
Wow, blast from the past! That sketch was probably from 2002 when I was a designer at Evo Design in Connecticut. Hard to believe that was 11 years ago.