Please critique my resume?

Thanks for the feedback - even though it’s frustrating, I need it. Frustrating because I made this version to comply with the recommendations of another resume thread here, using Michael DiTullo’s resume as an example (see here: http://www.michaelditullo.com/Design/RESUME.html ) My assumption was that Michael dropped the formatting to fit more on one page, so I did the same…

Attached is an example of the formatting I was working with prior to trying to trim it all down.
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