Please critique my resume?

You misspelled ‘DESIGN’.
+1 on Richard’s comments.
The ‘trend’ in resumes these days seem to be leading in with a bio, introduction, or brief description of yourself (in glowing terms of course), before going into specific expertise. It might mean in this case that ‘relevant experience’ takes priority over where you went to school and when you graduated. This might be due to more people being self-taught and gathering experience first-hand vs through school.