My hat’s off to Choto and PackageID for taking the time to look over my stuff! It’s been super valuable.
I spent the day tweaking and making some changes, specifically: Added a features page explaining the water bottle, added benefits of my SimSa stove over the coleman stove, created a design goals page for the water bottle project, added an exploded view of the RC Car project, and added the 3D printing and laser cutting to the SimSa Building it page.
It would be greatly appreciated for more feedback if anyone wants to take a stab at it.
Ps, I’m going to really work on those sketching skills these coming weeks, it’s definitely my weakest point in my portfolio and thanks for pointing that out.
Version 2.1 (4mb) http://s3images.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/471885_lWFoHAuKGv5i8pkRXp9scW9r_.pdf
Thanks again!