A big shout out to Pojo and bulletproof for the feedback, I really appreciate it and I tried to address some of the issues that were raised. 
I went back and made some revisions, here’s version 2.0. (It’s a 4 mb pdf)
If I could have some more feedback that would be awesome, what needs to be improved or changed? Feel free to be harsh, I can take it.
http://s3images.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/471885__aEpTl6jDjZ7y2QEcanFLXKeZ.pdf
Thanks for looking!