Hi Eddie!
First of all, beautiful site!!! Really nice.
I just took a quick look through flux, quality prototype! Solid modelling skills you got there. I would like to see some more sketches with the project, loose ones from the beginning showing initial ideas and show us how you solved some problems along the way. If you can pull your viewers into the project with a story and how you think and solve the issues that arise they will care that much more about it.
Another critique I have of it would be to lengthen the time of the slideshow down at the bottom- I was trying to read why it was good for each different kind of rider and it kept on switching on me before I could get any info out of it- so maybe make it a bit longer so people can get what you’re trying to say with that slideshow.
But really loving the design, cool stuff!