Hey Pritchre ^.^
I’m popping in kind of late but I hope it’s not too late to give feedback?
First off I think your portfolio looks really nice. The underlying grid works, as do the bleed pictures and over-layed text. I do however agree with most people here that your graphic treatment is VERY loud. Your text is so large that it appears as shouting (which works for titles, but not so much for paragraph text) I also think you need to make your text more consistent. This might not be the case but it seems like sometimes you change the size, change the boldness etc. Pick three sizes and stick to them throughout the portfolio, it will make it feel much more unified.
Also, I really liked your ideation sketches in the backpack project, and thought they were actually much better then your final render. I think you could stand to take another stab at that, and you might even want to build it in CAD since you dont really have any projects that show off CAD skills yet but you post it under your skills.
Everything else has already been mentioned by above.
It is already looking great! Now it just needs some cleaning up 