Hey Rance!!
Looks great!! In addition to what other people have said (especially trimming down the playground project a bit)-
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shrink the description text on most pages. I think this will help with the lack of white space and make things feel even more organized.
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The harmony logo is a little much- I think the outside circles are too distracting. Maybe just using the word harmony with the “o” treatment is enough?
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on the market page for the backpack project- i think you can get rid of the black outline of the circle, and then maybe use a second color for one of the sectors? If the middle color gets dark enough from the overlap, it might even look relaly nice if the question mark was white!
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the “adaptpack” render page could use some descriptive text- even though the next page has more details, it just seems like the page could use some explanations of details or something.
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“how it works” page is missing a page number
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On the “what are the issues page” for the card project, the bottom row of boxes don’t have a top line and there’s no page number.
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if you’re going to use page numbers, choose the type of pages not to include and be consistent about it (like no page numbers on sketch pages or something). Right now it’s a little random which pages have it and dont have it. (you might have to adjust the rest of the layout or something, but it’s worth it for the consistency)
I know those are mostly minor things, but overall, its really really nice!