I agree that it is a little confusing with a skills section that only shows parts of a project. Would it maybe be possible to either organize the projects under the main skill, or list the main skills used under the project link? Regarding the projects…
- I feel that most of your projects feel a bit cut off. You aren’t showing the final outcome of either the front panel or the head strap, are you allowed to show that? If not, is there something else you can say or show?
- The strap project - what was the aim of the project? Did you make any decisions or recommendations? Was this used by anyone, or what was the final outcome?
- The rear panel organization project seems like it would benefit from a before and after comparison, as well as an overview of the problems with the initial design.
- The table looking thing under aesthetic design - sorry, but it really quite weak. Have you got a photo of what they made? Does it look good? If not, maybe scrap it.
- The ball launcher, you say that it’s currently in use. Could you make more of a project out of this? What decisions and considerations went into the design? Were there iterations, and what changed during those? Photo of it in use?
The PEOSC section, especially the branding, seems a bit stronger from a design POV, good work. It’s good to see a bit of iteration. Maybe bring that up a bit? Right now you get to it last, reading from top left.
hope that helped,
Nik