ID Portfolio in progress, I really appreciate any feedback.

Hi Luke

Some quick feedback

  1. Try to find a way to number and write text on top of an image. The text looks too big and distracting.
    Eg. the text on your pictures you are making the characters length by writing ‘three’ why not just ‘3’
  2. it would be good if u have a grid layout and follow it throughout your slides, its distracting on one side something is bleeding off to the edge while reading.
  3. it would be good if you could specify the amount of time you have spent on each project. hence the recruiter can judge your capacity and capability to work on projects.