Hi Leo,
For a 12 year old you have some nice work here. I did not look close into the text you have written, but quickly scanned over it. I have a couple of tips for you:
- They ask to show 2d thinking and creativity. You have some sketches, but they are only from 1 product. I think it would be nice to show a combination of sketches with different kinds of cameras and shapes. For example:
- The lay-out is a bit to clean for me personally and not really attractive. Maybe it would be nice to align all the images and work with a grid.
Here is a website about a book that is about portfolios: http://portfoliohandbook.com. I have not used this book yet, but will look into it when I will create my new portfolio.