I would like to know what u think about it.
i like your toy kichen…maybe you could intergrate a few sketchs on th board instead of just having one image.
i want process…more process
Yes I guess u´r right I dont have any sketches posted thanks 4 the advice.
Hi IOI.
You’re definitely on the right track with your portfolio. My 2 comments:
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I agree with the panel on seeing more process. It’s nice to see that you could model up your ideas on computer, but I could tell you for a fact that a majority of IDers could do that easily, if not better. 3D renderings are nice to look at for a while, but seeing so much of it in portfolios, it gets BORING… Stick with the basics. Show us HOW U THINK!!!.. a problem you had to deal with and the design solution that you derived… and why your idea is innovative and better than the existing one…
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With your toy kitchen and elevator panel, it would be nice to see scale… maybe throw a person in the image (like u did in the table-chair project)… again, it’s not that i don’t have a clear picture in my head what size it should be, but heck, I was always taught that when you present an idea to a client, always assume that you’re communicating to a “dim” person… someone who won’t understand that the toy kitchen is small enough for kids aged so-and-so to use, and the panel is at a comfortable height so that midgets will all be able to reach the buttons as well as giants…
Anyway, keep up the good work!
Well I call that a feed back ,thanks 4 your advices CreativeDIP .Your right ,there is no reference to the dimension for the 3 Objects ,I will update my portfolio thinking in all ur advices ,so thanks again 4 your opinion (helped me alot) 
My advice:
“Passionated” isn’t a word, so much.
“Profession” is the correct spelling.
Good luck, kiddo.