My first Photoshop render

Hi, thanks for the comments.

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Rendering - I’m certainly happier with the rendering than my first attempt, it’s amazing what a few helpful comments for you experienced guys can do however I still think it can be vastly improved but I’m not sure what to do to take it up a notch. Any comments would be apprciated, don’t worry about being harsh any crit welcome.

Design - I’m still not sure of the design. I think ommitting the lens cover improves looks and will improve durability, but I will have to find a material I can manufacture with a coloured part with a flush mounted transulant center that won’t fog. I’m also having trouble sourcing a suitable CCD array. I know they’re out there but manufacturers aren’t particularly keen to spend time with a student who probably isn’t going to buy any so I’m having difficulty finalising the camera housing. I also need to get a move on and get the control unit and button parts designed.

Thanks for all the help so far