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Postby Sumistha_Das » July 13th, 2017, 11:15 pm


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yo wrote:Some really nice improvement. I'd like to see you try to get a lot looser. How abstract can you make it and still have it read? As an example check out this sketch of a drill that my friend Todd Herlitz‎ did. Incredibly loose but it is still there.


Hi Yo,

Apologies for the late reply. It’s a struggle for me to sketch loose. If I go really loose, the sketch ends up looking really messy. When I try to avoid the mess it turns out super clean but the sketch loses energy.

After reading your comment and watching your YouTube channel, sketched few bags. I tried my best to sketch loose and avoid the mess. One thing I have realized that when I was sketching loose I was able to do more sketches. Although, don’t know if that’s a good or a bad skill.

This week I will try to sketch more abstractly.
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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » July 13th, 2017, 11:16 pm


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250gb wrote:Hey these recent ones are great. Your linework is always very neat and you seem to have good weights going on. Can I ask do you use french curves to assist or is it all free hand? Cheers


Hey sorry for the late reply. And the ans is freehand :D

Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » July 13th, 2017, 11:26 pm


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In last few days I drew some bags and tried to sketch loose.
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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » July 13th, 2017, 11:27 pm


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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby yo » July 14th, 2017, 10:37 am

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Nice work. Don't be afraid to push the indication materials in those bag sketches. I see a few stipples and stick lines.

On the flashlight, I think you could use a quick overlay to get a little morse space between the battery area and the handle. Draw through the form, I think you would see the far edge of that battery shelf. Nice form work on that one though! Lots of improvement here!

Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » July 15th, 2017, 11:02 pm


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yo wrote:Nice work. Don't be afraid to push the indication materials in those bag sketches. I see a few stipples and stick lines.

On the flashlight, I think you could use a quick overlay to get a little morse space between the battery area and the handle. Draw through the form, I think you would see the far edge of that battery shelf. Nice form work on that one though! Lots of improvement here!


Thanks for the feedback Yo. I worked on it yesterday and after drawing through I found my mistakes. Posting the new sketch.
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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby yo » July 16th, 2017, 12:51 pm

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there you go! much better.

Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » July 21st, 2017, 12:35 pm


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This week I didn't stick to one subject. Tried different objects and marker techniques. Also did one digital sketching. But whatever I sketched tried to stay loose.
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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » July 21st, 2017, 12:38 pm


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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » July 21st, 2017, 12:42 pm


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