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Postby Sumistha_Das » December 28th, 2017, 1:00 am


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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » December 28th, 2017, 1:01 am


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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » December 28th, 2017, 1:01 am


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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby yo » December 28th, 2017, 3:35 pm

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watches are tough. Not only is the perspective challenging, but the proportions are so critical; case thickness, crown/pusher size, strap/attachment width are all crucial to it being believable.... and I mess it up most times as well. It is a good practice subject! I think you can push the ideas further on the USB drives. For example, the center top sketch looks like it has a little lip in the form to make it easer to remove from your laptop. Little ideas like that are great. it doesn't have to be this crazy big innovation, it can just be some thoughtfulness that makes it a little more pleasurable and easier to use. I try to find a couple of those things and then exaggerate them and turn that into the design.

Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » December 31st, 2017, 6:48 pm


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Never tried class material with markers, so thought of giving it a short this afternoon.
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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » December 31st, 2017, 6:49 pm


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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » December 31st, 2017, 6:53 pm


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This razor sketch took me 15 mins. Sketched it after watching Micheal's razor tutorial on youtube. Don't think did a good job but wanted to sketch quickly.
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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » December 31st, 2017, 6:54 pm


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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » December 31st, 2017, 6:56 pm


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yo wrote:watches are tough. Not only is the perspective challenging, but the proportions are so critical; case thickness, crown/pusher size, strap/attachment width are all crucial to it being believable.... and I mess it up most times as well. It is a good practice subject! I think you can push the ideas further on the USB drives. For example, the center top sketch looks like it has a little lip in the form to make it easer to remove from your laptop. Little ideas like that are great. it doesn't have to be this crazy big innovation, it can just be some thoughtfulness that makes it a little more pleasurable and easier to use. I try to find a couple of those things and then exaggerate them and turn that into the design.


Thanks for the feedback Micheal. I will do one more round of pen drive sketches with more emphasis on forms.

Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » January 12th, 2018, 11:44 pm


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Had a little difficulty to get the proportion right for these shoes. I am still not sure how close I am in terms of proportions. Haven't sketched many shoes in the past. So trying to get into the practice of sketching shoes.
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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » January 12th, 2018, 11:45 pm


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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » January 12th, 2018, 11:46 pm


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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby ralphzoontjens » January 15th, 2018, 5:17 am

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Overall your sketches work, I like the scissors sketch, it is simple and communicative. The cut-section lines work very well if they are done precisely. Your designs are a bit generic, see if you can brainstorm a bit more and develop your own design language into the products you draw.

Your glass rendering needs work, start by studying the basics and drawing from perception. In reality, refractions behave quite differently and there is a logic to it enhancing the 3D-aspect of your drawings, if you can catch it.
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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » January 26th, 2018, 1:05 am


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So after coming back from vacation sketched bunch of shoes. The first shoe is inspired by one of the Adidas tennis shoes. The second and third ones are my ideation sketches.
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Re: Looking For Feedback

Postby Sumistha_Das » January 26th, 2018, 1:20 am


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These three are existing KEEN hiking shoes. My sketches are still evolving when it comes to my designs. This week I'm planning to have reference photos while sketching any product and I will try to come up with my own design.
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