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Re: InvertedVantage's Sketch a Day Thread

Postby yo » September 21st, 2015, 7:14 pm

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IV, are you looking for feedback? Might be easier if you picked a topic and sketched on it for several successive weeks at higher volume.

Re: InvertedVantage's Sketch a Day Thread

Postby InvertedVantage » September 27th, 2015, 6:20 pm


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Hey yo,

Thanks. I am looking for critique. I know I'm super behind at this point but I'm going to keep endeavoring for a sketch a day. The topic is desktop computers, so...here goes. Not sure where to start with these but I wanted to put at least something up for the time being.
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Re: InvertedVantage's Sketch a Day Thread

Postby yo » September 27th, 2015, 6:47 pm

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OK, I feel like I can get a better sense of where you are at from this.

I recommend moving to just one or two concepts on a page. If you were going to present your idea visually, no words, how would you show me what you are thinking? What kind of computer is this? Is there a monitor? What brand?

If you are going to do a page of thumbnails, try to give some hierarchy thorough size.

Here is an example of an all in one desktop page.
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