OK, I feel like I can get a better sense of where you are at from this.
I recommend moving to just one or two concepts on a page. If you were going to present your idea visually, no words, how would you show me what you are thinking? What kind of computer is this? Is there a monitor? What brand?
If you are going to do a page of thumbnails, try to give some hierarchy thorough size.
Here is an example of an all in one desktop page.
