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beginning of my Ids career

Postby Moch20 » October 31st, 2013, 1:34 pm


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My name is Rus I just started 2 semesters ago at AAU, Shoes and art has been a big part of my life and I plan on eventually designing shoes. Just looking for feed back and help, thanks.

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Postby Moch20 » October 31st, 2013, 2:11 pm


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Postby Moch20 » November 4th, 2013, 7:00 pm


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11/4 some of this weeks homework toy cars, boats, and mice. any help or critique would be greatly appreciated. I need to get better at my sketching

Re: beginning of my Ids career

Postby Moch20 » November 15th, 2013, 6:57 pm


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Re: beginning of my Ids career

Postby choto » November 15th, 2013, 9:21 pm

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Nice stuff Moch20. Good to see you're drawing shoes in perspective as well, it's easy to fall into the trap of only drawing sideviews.

As far as presentation goes, I'd definitely hop on a scanner at school, or buy a cheap one and scan your stuff in. I have found that people tend to respond more to well documented sketches vs. the camera phone type posts.

Keep up the hard work, looking forward to seeing more

Re: beginning of my Ids career

Postby Moch20 » November 15th, 2013, 10:14 pm


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@choto thank you thank you for the feed back I really appreciate it. I will scan my work in from here on out and you will definitely see more of my work. Thanks again!

Re: beginning of my Ids career

Postby Moch20 » November 18th, 2013, 7:54 pm


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a few sketches from this week simple shape BBQ grills to Evolutionary, what do you guys thinkImageImageImageImageImage A few watches ImageImageImage

Re: beginning of my Ids career

Postby mixel » November 19th, 2013, 11:12 am

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Looks good, but it might be nice to put multiple designs on one piece of paper (and don't be afraid to let things overlap or interfere).

A couple of things I would like to mention:
- You can add contour lines to make it more easy to read the shape. You did this partly with your last watch design, but you can also do this for your BBQ designs.
- You play around with different line weights what is good, but use more than two thicknesses. For example your first BBQ has almost only thick lines, so there is no difference anymore.
- In some sketches it looks like your markers are almost empty, if this is the case refill them asap :)

Keep up the good work.

Re: beginning of my Ids career

Postby Moch20 » December 27th, 2013, 1:41 am


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Postby Moch20 » December 27th, 2013, 1:44 am


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Re: beginning of my Ids career

Postby IDAL » December 29th, 2013, 9:12 am

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I would try to make them a bit more loose, extend the lines beyond the sketch itself, try to play with the focus of the viewer and more line work. There's a clear improvement in your sketches, keep it up! Happy sketching!
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Postby Moch20 » January 5th, 2014, 4:35 pm


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Postby Moch20 » January 5th, 2014, 4:37 pm


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Re: beginning of my Ids career

Postby Moch20 » September 10th, 2014, 3:10 pm


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I apologize for not posting my sketches but heres a few from last semester. ImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImageImage

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