feedbacks for sketches and work

Postby Deniz15 » August 24th, 2012, 7:57 am

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Hey guys, new to this discussion but have been constantly visiting this awesome website..
My name is Dennis Yu and I'm currently a third year student at Monash University in Melbourne, Australia. My focus is transportation design.

I wanted to use this opportunity to show people my recent works and most importantly any feedbacks is welcome because I need them to improve and think better.

my online portfolio is : http://www.coroflot.com/dennisyu

Here are some recent sketches if you can't be bothered clicking into the link.

lex.jpg
lexus


steve vai audi.jpg


weird form.jpg



any feedback is welcome!


thank you,

Dennis

Re: feedbacks for sketches and work

Postby Deniz15 » September 1st, 2012, 3:22 am

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holden folio_Page_02.jpg


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audi.jpg

Re: feedbacks for sketches and work

Postby J6Studios » November 29th, 2012, 3:23 pm

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All of your computer work has the same gestural quality. I'd like to see some variations in your work.
Maybe some tighter, more realistic work or some more detailed drawings.

Also, all of your sketches are really sketchy. Maybe some tighter sketch work to show you can do stuff outside the computer. Your perspective and construction is off on some of the interiors.

Re: feedbacks for sketches and work

Postby Deniz15 » January 7th, 2013, 11:49 am

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@ J6Studios: thanks for your comments! I only saw the comment now. I'm uploading some recent works, I hope they've improved from the previous ones! Although I'll be taking your advices into consideration in my future works. any feedback is welcome thanks!
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Re: feedbacks for sketches and work

Postby Deniz15 » January 7th, 2013, 11:57 am

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here some concept/illustration
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Re: feedbacks for sketches and work

Postby Deniz15 » January 7th, 2013, 12:01 pm

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Re: feedbacks for sketches and work

Postby Deniz15 » January 7th, 2013, 12:05 pm

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Re: feedbacks for sketches and work

Postby Deniz15 » January 7th, 2013, 12:14 pm

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some 3d modelling work as well..
its a concept bike for Quiksilver in the 2027
more images can be seen on coroflot.com/dennisyu


thanks again! feedbacks are appreciated
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Re: feedbacks for sketches and work

Postby sketchroll » January 7th, 2013, 6:58 pm

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Hot sketches Deniz15

I like how they look sculpted rather than drawn. I keep telling myself I need to learn to draw and paint like that, but I still haven't put the hours into it :/
My current setup: Core i7 4790 + 16gb ram + 250gb SSD + Windows 8.1 + Adobe Photoshop CC + Yiynova MSP19u

Re: feedbacks for sketches and work

Postby Deniz15 » January 9th, 2013, 12:18 am

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thanks! put more hours in and you'll see results :)

here's some more,

automotive + concept art
any feedbacks appreciated! thanks!
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alfa2.jpg
MAZDA CROSS.jpg

Re: feedbacks for sketches and work

Postby yo » January 10th, 2013, 1:15 am

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That Alfa is interesting. I think it would be a nice SAAB actually. The wrap around windscreen and sloping back give it the SAAB aero feel.

Re: feedbacks for sketches and work

Postby Deniz15 » January 10th, 2013, 3:53 am

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ahyeah.. i get what you mean!

here's a couple more and i hope they look more like what I try to represent :)
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bmw-i.jpg
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Re: feedbacks for sketches and work

Postby Deniz15 » January 21st, 2013, 7:35 pm

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and some interiors..
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