Updated 06.07.2018
Hi Core 77 Forum users
I designed the Alkemista Alcohol Infusion Vessel for my client, the product made $120,000+ via crowdfunding
The Product won the Red Dot Product Design 2018 Award
https://jayjohl.com/industrial-design-alkemista/
All and any constructive criticism on both the product and the page is welcome.
Thank you
-Jay Johl
This is an excellent exhibition of process and the product is cool. The graphic design needs a lot of work, though. Right now the fonts and spacing just aren’t working. Maybe go on behance and look at some graphic designers’ layouts for inspiration.
also i think this belongs in “portfolios”
Thanks John for the feedback.
I’ll improve my UI/UX as much as I can.
Thanks for the appreciation in the work
Mods move to “portfolios”
_YO
January 10, 2018, 4:22pm
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I think that link is not a good way to get feedback.
Hey Michael
Great talk at the 2014 Core77.com object culture conference.
“I want to draw stuff from the future” that’s a great phrase and quote for designers!
If you have any ideas on ways I should share my case study page to receive feedback and criticism it would be much appreciated
Thanks again.
Jay Johl
_YO
January 16, 2018, 12:03am
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Jay,
Thanks for coming to the talk. It was a un one to give.
I’d post the work directly into the forum like this poster did. Notice the amount of feedback:
Hi everyone, I recently finished documenting one of my projects from my first semester of the Industrial Design Masters program at UIC and wanted to share it for any feedback you might have. Thanks in advance!
I designed a desk lamp that uses a ring form as a more aesthetic and simplified re-imaging of the classic Angelpoise desk lamp joints.
(Behance link for bigger images) Behance
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